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RE: Did I Kill a Girl and Liked it? Part 1/2

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

Really dude, it is better written than the first one. I just want to know if Dr Sanchez tried to intubate the tiny baby and failed, or just stop CPR, you know a delivery could be a pretty troublesome moment.

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OK i'll post part two tonight