I feel for Lacy ... and the way I feel she needs to get out of there is confirmed during that rapid change of pace as the story builds up. Well-written and engaging!
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I feel for Lacy ... and the way I feel she needs to get out of there is confirmed during that rapid change of pace as the story builds up. Well-written and engaging!
Thanks @deeanndmathews!! I super appreciate your feedback!
You're welcome ... as a writer myself, I know how important it is!