My mind was wandering over to do list
While you were gazing at my rims
I was shy to even hold your hand
Where you pulled me and I gasped
Whispering those love chats
Tickles through my body, I was taken aback
Love never made me so fearless
There was a feeling of being passionate
My heart beats got faster than ever
As I could sense you closer
You rested your head on mine
And when I opened my eyes
Immediately you locked my lips in frenzied
First time ever, the thing of closed eyes, I saw and felt it in open and indeed, real.
Your poem offers a wondrous look into love. It captures an essence of innocence mixed with 'real' feelings of love. It opens a door for the reader. You should post more poems
Thank you so much. It means a lot. Really. I will surely write more. :D
A poem which really got to my feelings.. As @zaggyshop said you should write more. I'm following you! ;)
I am glad you could feel it. And thank you. I followed you too :D