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RE: [Original Novella] Tell Me What the Rules Are Going to Be, Part 1

in #writing6 years ago

Very good start, these are the stories that I like that suspense thrills and makes you want to read the next part, play wait to see if Papa is a victim of the mysterious call, which "will be those rules that implore the author of the call ", What a strong sound it will be that it leaves you unconscious.
Waiting for the second part @Alexbeyman