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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure: First Encounter, Part 7 (the finale!)

in #writing7 years ago

He stopped mid sentence and took a step back. His friend back at the console turned just in time to see the visitor withdraw a rifle and pair of clips from inside the suit. “May God forgive me for what I am about to do.”

I read the whole story in two days. This was SUCH a ride!

I am eagerly wating for you to continue it. It is one of the most cinematic readings i've found on this platform!