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RE: Her Thirties Part 13

in #writing7 years ago

I smiled and Cam smiled back at me, wiping chocolate shake from his upper lip.

There. Another great detail that just gives a vivid image to the reader and makes the whole scene richer. I have so much to learn in order to use these right.

I am still chatching up with this one. A great story, as always! Thank you very much for sharing!