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RE: Children of Sol - Prequel part 3

in #writing7 years ago

No struggle or murmur of protest and no evidence to show the teens lived in recent times. Their bodies lay desiccated for a moment, perfect mummified remains, before crumbling to dust to be absorbed by the earth they lay upon.

You really have a way to describe action scenes and deaths... I love it.