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RE: Dusty and the Seven Shudder Sisters - Part 12

in #writing7 years ago

Hello @michelle.gent how was your weekend?
this part is an excellent continuation of the previous one. There is even more mysticism and stiffness here. You play on our nerves :)

“I don’t want to hear it, old woman. You have nothing to say that I’m interested in hearing. You used your gift to threaten and dominate. Not just your human victims but those you called ‘sister’. I see a future for your soul. It’s going to be hell!”

This was said in the style of harsh fighters, where the protagonist always defeated and remained unperturbed. I like how Dusty does it :)

Thank you, excellent sequel

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Oops... and my weekend was a busy-busy-busy array of cars and friends!

I hope you had a great weekend too!

my weekend passed very quickly, the impression was created that they were not there :)
cars are your second passion, not often writers are fond of high-speed driving and stylish cars

I'm not sure I could list my passions in numerical order... they change with my mood :)

it's very good that you do not focus on one thing or another, but live a diverse and full life. I aspire to this :)

It's something I've learned over the years... also, this:

Learn from others' mistakes, you won't live long enough to make them all.

I agree that it is necessary to learn from other people's mistakes. It is also appropriate to say such words .... "Do today what others do not do and then tomorrow you will be able to live as others can not."
Sooner or later every person makes mistakes. But it's good, since this is a valuable experience and our mistakes make us smarter.

Thank you for picking out pieces that you like. It gives me chance to see what other people like about my writing.