Zak as before remains in the spotlight. Sinbad is offended by him and I'm interested in how events will develop further. The chapter turned out to be versatile, as always the main trump card is your delightfully made dialogues, with a sense of humor.
It is also interesting how the relationship between Zak and Liz will develop, because judging by the conversations (Liz looks at Zak, smiles, maybe it's sympathy), she likes it. The main advantage of Zack is his charisma.
Thank you, I'm glad to read it.
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