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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 5

in #writing7 years ago

I'm still very happy when I read such a detailed description of actions and situations, it helps to create a clearer picture of what is happening in my mind.
This chapter has added more action, this fight gives a certain charm when reading. The intrigue is preserved, especially at the very end, where the chapter ends at the most interesting moment :)
Thank you, I liked it