The verses of the navigator (English version)

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The verses of the navigator (English version)


My passion is the sea,marine fighter in the storm big maneuver rudder in hand in the command booth no land in sight, in deep water sailing with only the starry firmament and the cold breeze


My maps, my compasses and a sextant my course guide in nights lost with your memories, missing your love untamed breeze wich takes away the melody i am playing ferocious windward wind that the thoughts fragment


I want that her ears my tune from the distance listen i see your kisses like beacon light that light my path are your image and memories those wich my heart induce


Another day in the labor deck the sailor feeling today is a day less to arrive at his port knowing that his beloved waits anxiously for their meeting.


He says goodbye heartily and very grateful for his reading @freddysanchez

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Hey @freddysanchez! This is freaking awesome!

Just so happened to be discussing a concept regarding these themes with a friend for a song, thank you for your epic words, also is that a picture of you?

Thanks for your words motivate me to continue writing.

The photo is not me, it's an image that I got on the internet

Thanks for reading my work.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

I appreciate for his. Thanks for your sharing nice post here.

By the way, I have poetry. I hope you want to give me feedback. Thanks

You're My Glorious Sunset

https://steemit.com/smartphonephotography/@anggreklestari/you-re-my-glorious-sunset-day-5-100-days-of-poetry-challenge

100 days of interesting poetry challenge. My English is not good my native language is Spanish I try to help myself a lot with the translator and an old dictionary that I have, I consult a lot before uploading something in English because I want to do it well. But sometimes mistakes happen and people notice and help you correct. I think Steemit is an opportunity to learn by doing what you like. I have my support of how little I know and what I can help you with. I'm going to follow you really I liked what you wrote and the very good photos the landscape is magical is very nice.

Thanks for reading my work.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

This post has received gratitude of 18.16% from @appreciator courtesy of @freddysanchez!

selection of good and perfect words.
I think you have a talent in this case, keep working bro

Thanks I try to do my job well I like poetry. Thank you for reading.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

it's my birthday! i think no body care about it :D

Greetings happy birthday.

regards

Freddy Sanchez

This is very inspiring. I recently started writing and I think this is quite brilliant. I would love for you to help me with my writings so I can get better. I am following you:)

Thank you for reading and admiring my writing. I'm available to help you with what I can help you.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

Great lines, i love the way you deluver them in paragraphs.

What exactly do you wish to convey with this word? Please tell me english is not my first language.

earsnmy

Hello, thank you for reading my work and I have an apology. In fact, it was a mistake to write the publication.

Now you can read without the error it was a space and place an N.

Thanks for your comment helped me to correct.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

EXPRESAS TU PROFUNDA PASIÓN A TRAVES DE ESTE POEMA, TE FELICITO.

Gracias me alegra que te guste mi trabajo siempre trato de dar lo mejor de mi en lo que escribo.

Saludos.

Freddy Sanchez

nice work
keep it up

Thanks for taking a few minutes and reading my work. I'm glad you like it.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

Big thanks for this. I'll share this verses to my relatives seafarers. it will inspire them. thank you again :)

Thank you for reading and taking my writing to your friends and family. You know I have another version of the same writing but in a sonnet, only I have not passed it to English for the rhymes and the metric is something more complex this is the free version.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

Great and beautiful write up.... Very motivating and put me in good moods

Thanks for taking a few minutes and reading my work, I'm glad that people like what I write.

Greetings.

Freddy Sanchez

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