Not trying to be a grammar Nazi, but I just read the first chapter and I noticed a grammatical error. I hope you don't mind me pointing it out.
"....I groaned and stood up from the hard and uncomfortable plastic chair that I was sat on", instead of "sat on", you probably meant to write "sitting on".
I know how one edits and reedits, their drafts to make them sound perfect and sometimes it leads to little errors like this. I just hope you corrected it, in your final draft!
Is it a harlequin type of novel? The first chapter is intriguing... :)
Thank you @fuchsia.ink! :D
Feel free to point them out, how else will I learn. ;)
Luckily for Smashwords and Amazon, you can update them easily!
Awesome! :) Wishing you loads of luck and success!
Thank you!