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RE: Hearts of Darkness - Plague of the Void Seeds / 9

in #writing8 years ago

So glad you took my advice on the dialogue, this is definitely the best installment yet. It reads much more naturally I think. I enjoyed the bit about the Valhalconin culture a lot. Can't wait for the next one!

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;)) it was very good advice. I feel bad for anyone who preferred the other style but ultimately I hope the writing will be better for them too.