so it's completely another book? problem solved.
And the raven has a girlfriend raven, who he calls his "mamasita", but the girlfriend is reluctant and frigid and is interested in other stuff other than being a raveny girlfriend.
so it's completely another book? problem solved.
And the raven has a girlfriend raven, who he calls his "mamasita", but the girlfriend is reluctant and frigid and is interested in other stuff other than being a raveny girlfriend.
Sounds like you should be writing a book yourself!!!
It's not a completely other book. Some scenes stayed but moved. Some were added. Some removed. Ugh. Might just get over my shit and post them with a disclaimer and let voters / downvoters figure it out.