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RE: Lovestruck - A Bloody Modern Fairy Tale - Part One

in #writing7 years ago

No one does first-person pacing like you.

And you, my narrator, are no better than this captor, drawing me in, locking me in that trunk along with... you. At least I have your company.

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Wow. That's a hell of a compliment @geke. Thank you :D