I'm glad you keep writting this story. I guess the Finns hate hearing that and curse Tolkien for now and ever, but Finnish actually looks Elvish to me :)
Regarding any feedback, I would dare to ask for more (no Pepsi involved, I am drinking beer all nigth long; beeing a Czech requires durable liver). What you've published is a merely a bead in a necklace and I'd like you to hand me the entire piece of jewellery first.
Thank you! I'm not at all offended about Tolkien's influence on and about Finnish language, I think it's actually pretty nice. He was after all a great connoisseur of Finnish mythology and folklore, and had a deep appreciation for both, which adds a unique charm to the Elven language.
As for the complete story, I appreciate your enthusiasm! I'm crafting this narrative meticulously, much like assembling a delicate necklace. Each bead and pearl needs careful honing and refinement before it can be elegantly added to the whole. Rest assured, I'm dedicated to bringing you the entire piece of jewelry, one exquisite element at a time.
Cheers to your beer filled Czech nights – may your adventurous spirit and durable liver continue to guide you on your own creative endeavors! :)