@shimmertee, i won't lie and say i read the whole of your post. I believe it's good content...but i want to talk about the structure of your post.
In cases of long posts such as this, it's preferable to use alotta photos "in-between lines" It'll make reading more enjoyably relatable. Don't just use words...use pictures too. (Trust me, I learnt that the hard way).
Asides that, I don't see anything you'll need to work on. Like i said, i didn't read this post till the end cos it quickly got boring for me. I believe if you add more media attachments, you'll attract a bigger, wider audience.😁
I knew about that before I even started,it's my first post I successfully disclosed a picture..Thanks so much @godwine
You've started well...
I'll be reading more from you.