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RE: The plight of some women in their marriages

in #writing7 years ago

@shimmertee, i won't lie and say i read the whole of your post. I believe it's good content...but i want to talk about the structure of your post.

In cases of long posts such as this, it's preferable to use alotta photos "in-between lines" It'll make reading more enjoyably relatable. Don't just use words...use pictures too. (Trust me, I learnt that the hard way).

Asides that, I don't see anything you'll need to work on. Like i said, i didn't read this post till the end cos it quickly got boring for me. I believe if you add more media attachments, you'll attract a bigger, wider audience.😁

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I knew about that before I even started,it's my first post I successfully disclosed a picture..Thanks so much @godwine

You've started well...
I'll be reading more from you.