RE: The complexities of love: A critical look into the concept of malady as explored in @mimy's "The football field where I lost my balls and my ghostly love story"

You should come and do a review of one of my stories. I would like to see another pair of eyes looking at my work as I'm my own worst critic and wouldn't do it any justice as much as you have done. I did not notice the psychopathic part of Sarah. I just thought this is something that happens in life at the time. Boy meets girl. The boy is super in love (lust?). Boy did everything for the girl. The girl is probably in love with another but may stay out of pity or just loves the attention (it's human to like the attention). Later, the whole things head to the predestined rocks. Bam. Love is gone. The same could be applied to the boy; where the boy behaves like the girl. I'd like to call it the way of the world.