You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Moon Girl: Part 3View the full contextgreenrun (66)in #writing • 7 years ago Interesting story, I'd recommend you write in shorter paragraphs. Improves readability and makes it easy on the eye :)
Oh wow! @greenrun read my story! yippppeeeeeee!!!! Noted...shorter paragraphs. So glad you liked it