Until the mid of the story, i was thinking that taylor is a girl ๐๐, until u told he was his brother. Anyway! Waiting for the next part.
Seems like u have a good knowledge of business as well since you mentioned the way viktor studied about zack. That was nice.
Also the quotation by @alienbutt was very impressive ๐. I have recently started to write fiction as well, so it got me ๐.
Nice work ๐๐ป