a minor major problem
her looks, they latch on without resistance,
a foothold on the mental castle moat.
the shapes and patterns empower my gaze,
smouldering my naked beat,
i glance for fulfillment,
i glare for brevity.
hindered by rose tinted glasses,
her presence enslaves all and sundry.
urges lurk beneath,
overtones of lust tuned to a minor key,
from dominant to subdominant,
skipping the diatonic,
skipping melancholy,
save the beat.
bewilderment entrancing the soul,
a balancing act of verse and chorus.
isolation prolonging the inevitable,
losing the sense of progression.
a resolution of sorts,
a modulation,
a motif.
what is a signature without a key,
what is a minor glitch without a major bitch.
what is a cadence if not authentic.
such is the music of love.
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i like that! How long does it take you to write something like that?
thank you nadine. usually a couple of hours. you write?
No i wish haha. That's why I was just curious how long it takes :) good work
@honeybee nice stuff. amazing to write such a beautiful words in a couple of hours. it show your artistic sense. keep writing. have a great day.
I love the superb language of the piece and how you played with the rhythm and the syllables. Good work.
thanks my friend. good to see another poet around. following.
@honeybee your poem is so great...hoping for your kind consideration to see also my article also @mrblu ^_^
Good job @honeybee
emotions as music flows ...love it..upvote my friend
nice post and pic
Dont forget to upvote follow & resteem
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Such is the music of love in the key of life....@honeybee. BRAVO!!!