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RE: The Wizards betrayal – A Concept Fantasy Story - Part One

in #writing7 years ago

Nice choice of words.. easy to understand..

first line filled me with awe, I want to fill my lungs with that breeze too...

nice plot.. want to read more.. one page at a time.

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Cool - thanks mate

...lets see what others reply with, I have a bit of anxiety about writing something I have zero experience with on a public blog like this..

you are good.. buddy.