Nice choice of words.. easy to understand..
first line filled me with awe, I want to fill my lungs with that breeze too...
nice plot.. want to read more.. one page at a time.
Nice choice of words.. easy to understand..
first line filled me with awe, I want to fill my lungs with that breeze too...
nice plot.. want to read more.. one page at a time.
Cool - thanks mate
...lets see what others reply with, I have a bit of anxiety about writing something I have zero experience with on a public blog like this..
you are good.. buddy.