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RE: Short Story #2 - The Conflict

in #writing7 years ago

Agree, understanding is the key - so that we may find some common ground.

Spoiler XD The heartbreak and turmoil are already strong in this chapter but the next one's abduction?! My heart can't take anymore XD

But I'm feeling there is a good ending here, as all stories are (even if it sometimes appear that it does not). Awesome writing, Maine. And I like the anime-style pictures too! Keep it up

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The next chapter is definitely more intense. And as for the ending, watch out! I hope you will. :)

Thank you very much Jazz, your kind words really mean a lot! :)