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RE: Eluviation (lyrics)

in #writing7 years ago

This looks like the refrain

Eluviation: soaking into the loam
I'm tryna make it all the way to the illuvial zone, I'm home!
Everybody thinks it's elegant to fly high. Not I!
Wanna sink into the earth down with the minerals.

This is a beautiful poetry that tends to embody the essence of life, it illuminates the inevitability of death and well it somehow serenades it with suprising acceptance, this is an amazing poetry here body

The best I've read so far this week.

The best here certainly @d-pend