This is totally beautiful I love the absolute portray of those beautiful flowers I've never heard of before, and I like the beautiful way you portrayed nature, it seems so amazing I can tell that the setting of this story looks quite old, like those lands of the happily ever after and definitely contain a little bit of magic as well.
This is totally beautifully written, I enjoyed it
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, I enjoy being in nature it's very peaceful and beautiful. I know I still have a lot more to go with my writing but I'm getting there! x)