Okay, you hooked me. This is brilliantly written. I don't seem to have the attention span to read from the beginning of serial stories (I should work on this), but I love when I can read a scene and feel the story... the essence of it, the essence of the characters, and enough action and mystery to want more. Well done.
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Thanks, Katrina - that's the challenge of serializing on Steemit - trying to break a tale into 500-700 word morsels that can still stand alone and satisfy readers who happen to drop by, without, of course, simply providing Bubblegum for the Eye, lol
Well you've had lots of practice, and seem to have figured it out! I'm glad I saw this in my feed. A tasty morsel indeed. Steem on! :)