I too am enjoying your story. It's easy to read and flows well. However, I believe you do want some honest feedback. Not so much big feedback really but more in the nitpicking type of thing, dare I say it, grammar nazi? I don't think 'Hostile's' is the word you're looking for it's 'hostels' and I'm still struggling with why you said at the very beginning a typical 'Caucasian' family...I don't think it was necessary to designate any race. These things detract from the story a little and it's the reason they do have editors and proof readers. Also, this is just my humble opinion of course and I've been known to be wrong, just ask the wife.
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Valid points...i have an Aunt who use to be an editor who said she would do the edits. She got a copy 4 years ago and to date, nothing from her. Sigh.