OK, this is amazing.
The story becomes very engaging and exciting from the first mention of the incident!
Once the ladies said that they shouldn't stay for too long in the village because of the free witches, I was really looking forward to the conflict; I guess I will have to wait a bit for that.
" I think I did most of the crying." This was so cute.
I've followed you, cheers! : )
Thank you! I hope not to disappoint!