Aw okay, that makes more sense. I won’t do a ton of re-writing on this one, but I’ll definitely try to incorporate this technique a little more directly into another post before the end of #bootcamp! Cheers. :)
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Don't do it for me. Your writing is great. You'd never have gotten that suggestion from me on this post, if it were not part of an assignment designed around that trick. LOL These blogs need to uniquely reflect each of you. If the tips fit, use them, but just like any acting tip,or art trick, if it doesn't work for you, don't use it.
Sounds great, I actually did blend it in a bit better. It’s less for “you” and more about me enjoying the challenge of trying to incorporate a new technique in my writing style (hey, the more tools the better, right?). Thanks for the feedback and I think I have a solid understanding of how to use this tip now. :)
Great!