Thanks bro! your always so supportive.
I think I made it a bit short? I just know I have so much to read already on Steemit to keep up with everyone, I figured people would just want something brief - pending other comments, I might do one more so people know I will keep it up. I guess then its up to the Steemians to let me know if its worth the continue:)
Yeah! It is a bit short but I think it is perfect for an opening chapter, Just like a trailer, Where we see a glimpse of whats going on but don't know the whole backstory. You wrote it beautifully brother. :))
This looks like an intriguing story and I wager everyone wants to know why Nathan is running away from his family? And What made his family his enemy?