Hi @iamscifi. I liked the final sentence; it's very good. However, history as such lacks more science fiction elements. It is as if he were reading a normal story but with certain technological words. Not bad but for me it lacks more atmosphere. Kind regards
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Thanks for your feedback. It's funny that you mention the lack of sci-fi depth, as I was thinking the same thing. Over the last few days, I added a decent amount of techxploration. Here a link the story in its entirety.
https://steemit.com/writing/@iamscifi/fuck-this-one-chapter-at-a-time-shit-here-s-the-whole-short-story-infin-ite-ration
You are very kind :) Thanks for the link