First I want to tell you that I am fascinated to see new narrators on steemit. I have spent the whole week reading dissimilar stories, from fantasy worlds to real stories.
Second. I loved the beginning of this story. In my opinion, I would change the title because the end does not necessarily justify it. Think about it.
"The telephone ring" Suggested title. You like?
A big hello @ivanm7. I hope to read you again.
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Thanks for the kind words. I'm not really sure where I'm going with this story so the title will have to wait for a few more chapters..
Thanks for reading the story! :)