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RE: Plagued lives[Original Story]/pt. 4

in #writing5 years ago

I like the title. Visually I lacked the separation of some paragraphs. I honestly liked the story; It has good characters, the third person narrative voice is quite firm and you achieved a great atmosphere. Congratulations on this original story. It has been a great pleasure to have read you @ivanm7

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Thanks a lot, hope you keep on reading!