My favorite stories are the ones that put in a lot of detail. From the color to the curtains to the specks of dust on the table, details can help readers imagine an entire world inside an authors head.
On another note you spelled my name wrong there at the end on this post and tip #2. lol. :) For some weird reason I resteemed this and it's not showing up that I did even though the resteem button is green. So many bugs with the site lately.
Oh my goodness, I am so sorry! I will fix this, thank you for bringing it to my attention!
Try resteeming it from a different browser, or different device when it does that. @giantbear taught me that trick ;)
Creating the image for the reader is the most simple and effective way to get your point across and make sure they retain the information you set forth :)