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RE: [Original Novella] Exit Party, Part 1

in #writing7 years ago

New entry?Cool!

It was her turn to tear up, though she was smiling. Happier than I’d seen her for many years. How could I destroy that smile? No, I couldn’t.

No you couldn't. Mams are something sacred ;-)
Really nice Alex
I also have one more suggestion if you are interested.
Check the tag "sndbox" since you write something new.
don't misjudge me...you know better just trying to be helpful.