believe it or not the entire purpose behind this story was to be less cryptic and more approachable lol (it appears i've failed [or more accurately also forgot] ).
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believe it or not the entire purpose behind this story was to be less cryptic and more approachable lol (it appears i've failed [or more accurately also forgot] ).
Oh my goodness, you're a human. Alright, now I'm actually curious about -how- you managed this piece. It seems so AI ... Interesting.
If there was any chance of me remembering what state and/or class of intoxication at the time of writing I'd let you know, but I don't remember.
I wrote it like everything I write (bursts of 5-15 mins stream of consciousness that sometimes works sometimes turns out like this)
I was actually going for a really cold robotic tone for this character so this comment makes me kinda happy
Well that's kind of awesome. I have a similar process for the Etaletai music. We may as well promote to one another eh? Haha, I dig the story.
Sure thing. I've been thinking about giving music yet another try, expressing joy, fun and irreverence in a literary setting is proving difficult (shit always turns out too mean or too crazy)
Personally I've found irreverence just as difficult in life. By that I mean I'm entirely too mean, and crazy.
forgive the shameless self-promotion (but hey it's steem) here's some stuff where it "worked" imo
https://steemit.com/writing/@mitthradiumn/of-rubedo
https://steemit.com/ficton/@mitthradiumn/of-pontus-part-1
https://steemit.com/life/@mitthradiumn/douglass-ruble-s-dope-dating-discussions-and-tips
https://steemit.com/steemit/@mitthradiumn/conversation-for-sale-1-sbd-for-in-depth-commentary