Oh wow. I don't even know where to start. The story within the story, the description of how she died, transitioning into her after death seamlesslym ending it with a natural way for her to step into the light.
This was damn good!
Oh wow. I don't even know where to start. The story within the story, the description of how she died, transitioning into her after death seamlesslym ending it with a natural way for her to step into the light.
This was damn good!
Coming from The Freak, that's some darn high praise. (and for those who don't know, he' s "The Freak" because no normal person wakes up one morning and randomly starts writing five-star material like he did, unless they're a genetically altered mutant or from another planet altogether.) Thank you, mk40!
As soon as I finished it I went to drop in my OCD nomination comment...and was kicking myself that gmuxx got to it first! This is a gold mine for the project!
LOL! Yep, GMuxx was there in the Workshop when I was getting feedback so he had a good running start.