I was a bit confused at first, but it all came together in the end. A tinge of humor mixed in with the supernatural, was that romance or avoidance? One can turn into the other you know! I enjoyed your story. Going to see what else you have posted.
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Thank you... it's difficult to get a serialised story out of a tale that was written and intended to be one, that's why there is sometimes a bit of confusion. I try to cut the story at a natural break... but sometimes it's not quite possible.
I'm glad you're going to read more of my work though :)