Like the others here, I too like the concept that has been presented here. It read well enough. Perhaps having had a chance to see more of who Kayden is before he is fighting for his life may add to it. And ending each episode on more of a cliffhanger (nothing overly dramatic, but so I really want to know how he fares). These are just suggestions, but like I said, I enjoyed the read, and what I can see is going to be an interesting world unfold before me.
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Haha! Stay tuned.
The result of the arrival of the giant bearded man might not be what could be guessed. Where Kayden ends up might be even less predictable.
I look forward to the reading the developments as they unfold. Keep the readers guessing - I like it.