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RE: [Short Story] You Don't Get to Fall In Love: A Gamer's Guide

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

Definitely worthy of the curie vote, and mine as well, such as it is. You have a gifted mind in order to create such unique descriptions. Rather than merely rely on dressed-up cliche adjectives you create your own unique simile's or metaphors. A planet for a digestive system... Certainly an enjoyable read. Thanks! Gonna check out your blog for a while.

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Thank you @nexusfyre! I'm glad I could share this story with an audience, it's been collecting dust on my google drive for years.

Sometimes good stories are like wine. They need to collect a little dust sometimes before their magic is realized. Or maybe not, I guess I don't really like dust in my wine...

With all this talk about wine, I just remembered I bought wine yesterday and couldn't find my corkscrew...