I love your story! I kind of want you to make an entire book out of it haha. Dang you're a crazy good writer. "Meijen dreamt of the past and felt a pang of melancholy. At a certain moment of her life, she had been happy. It was a different happiness from today, when she remembered and smiled at the memory." <---That totally hooks you in right from the start. Especially I think since so many people can relate to feeling nostalgic. Also, "The past had happened, but how could she trust her brain to keep an exact copy of it?" I love that line, the way you compared the human brain to an inanimate object like a filing cabinet or something. That's the kind of creativity with words that brings writing to life and makes it good.
:)) I'm really glad you like it. You know, this story is part of a big series I've been developing for a while. Big in the sense that it covers a lot of time (millions of years). I have only written maybe 6 or 7 stories for it at most.
Right now I'm developing another storyline too. This one is Meijen's universe (basically the same universe as this one except Meijen exists lol) and the one I'm doing nowadays is the Frozen Hell universe (which is more mythological; it follows the biblical universe but Hell gets frozen because of magical reasons and there are many other supernatural phenomena).
I found that Meijen is a Thai name, BTW. Could you confirm that for me now that you're there? Lol.