Great imagery, and I personally really enjoy the pace of your writing. My only criticism would be that there might be a few too many three syllable words for the average American reader.
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Great imagery, and I personally really enjoy the pace of your writing. My only criticism would be that there might be a few too many three syllable words for the average American reader.
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Thanks! I was worried it was opening a bit slow.