The separatist who strive vigorously,
engraving niche for division without attention for integration,
who build broken walls on muddy grounds
and turn the streets' clock in reverse order.
Unfair hostility in peaceful approach
but never was it,
They seek forceful favours in disguise
tearing apart the labours of heroes;
evoking mayhem and bridging fiercely sectionalism.
The sounds of war echoes,
travelling miles away to the grave of falling valour;
who wished to have returned alive
as few from the war front,
to tell you the upshot of your selfish misguided actions.
tell me your motive and I will tell you what negotiation can do,
without ringing aloud the bell of unholy war.
tell me your intentions and I will tell you what happens when people unite together.
They claim to be free, yet mentally chained,
they claim to love, yet bounded by tribalism
and rod of hatred which burns hard as refined as gold in the miner's bossom.
Shoot me and send my soul on errand
and pray I return,
to tell you the words of our heroes past;
who fought to keep us together
in peace, unity and love.
PeterPen_Writes
PPW
ALL PICTURES ARE EXTRACTED FROM GOOGLE IMAGE AND NOT MINE.
Meanwhile thanks to each and everyone of you who upvoted, commented and replied my first art poetic work right here https://steemit.com/poetry/@peterwrites/at-the-seashore-with-senorita-2017921t1247531z
Your word choice! God!!! Incomparable and parallel to non.
Your diction, 98%
Formatting, 98%
Inflow and right word substitution 98%
This is divine.
I pray oh God for the rebirth of Shakes...
He could have given up his soul again to boast of you as the best, with a hand shake.
I must commend this with a recommendation...
"Never stay away from the ink bro." That's my recommendation. Good luck mate.
ttopswag
Thank you. Not to worry, new generations of shakes are emerging and I know you aren't excluded.
Thank you so much for recommending. There are moment, you are just lost of words to appreciate someone. That's what is happening here. U real good Big Brother! 👏👏👏
I am humbled big Boss
Reference your pictures well. picture from google this is an example. Nic work
It is really not a preresiquite for him to use this reference styling. Insofarsas he acknowledged that the picture is not his.
Well done @peterwrites. Dont relent. You will get there.
Gunner, thanks brotherly. trust me. Anticipate anew. We're in this together.
aii bro. I will be expecting more.
Nice work
Thank U dare!!!
I dont know what to say but thank God for our heroes and the hero in you, this post is wonderful and awesome
Let me just die in writing and writing die in me then, the next is the hero.
Meanwhile, thanks dear. This I appreciate you
I love the flow of the narrative.
The climax is divine!
All societies need activivists, so you will return.... Power has stayed too long in the hands of those who tear apart the labour of heroes..... So you must return.
@mimy.. I love the flow of the narrative. Thank U.
Shifting the clock of the "Resident Evil" that lies right in our bosom is our sole responsibility. Here comes the usual saying that goes "power must change hand" All we ask and seek for is transparency, peace, love and freedom within and abroad!
Thank U mimy-U real good.
Upvoted!
"Shoot me and send my soul on errand
and pray I return,".... Wowwww I love that line... Thanks again for sharing your work. :-)
Thank you for upvote as well and I am glad you got reason(s) to upvote.
this is a piece by me.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@peterwrites/at-the-seashore-with-senorita-2017921t1247531z
You're very welcome. :-)
I understand
Thanks for your reply.
This is an amazing piece. Great job!
Thank you dan
Lovely work bro. Keep it up.