Interesting to see how your writing style evolves - seeing it side by side really shows how descriptive elements can so easily be left out, and the addition really enhances the writing
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Interesting to see how your writing style evolves - seeing it side by side really shows how descriptive elements can so easily be left out, and the addition really enhances the writing
It helps that I wrote the piece a LONG time ago... I think I've improved a little since...