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RE: Tomboy (Part One of Six)

in #writing7 years ago

This is mere introduction. Nettie seems like an interesting character. But a little bit more on the part of story would have kept us intrigued. (Just a suggestion) ;)

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Then I guess you'll just have to come back and read the second installment tomorrow. Trust me, it will be worth your while.