Woah... What James was experiencing while he "was" Rodney sounds like a hectic acid or mushroom trip. One thing though: In the last paragraph you wrote "James visibly teared up. “As bad as his childhood was, the streets were worse. My whole life I’ve felt that other people are often unfeeling, sadistic ogres. But James knew..." Shouldn't it be "But Rodney knew..."?
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