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RE: New Story - written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 44

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

We do not want to cross Liz. BTW: she is good at cleanups. That is one way to get the women out of the men's restroom.

I really enjoyed how you were able to control the action. The photos were great too. The whole story flowed for me.