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RE: Enter The Gregis - Short Story - Science Fiction

in #writing6 years ago (edited)

Poor Agnor. He only gets the girl after he is already dead. :(

Risky move, ripping open space and time like that.

I don't think any story that short ever had so much important stuff happen so fast!

That's the screenplay writer side of you, always economical, keeping the action moving. :)

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I didn’t want him to die. He had to risk it all the save the others. Thanks
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