Nice story indeed! Kids like daydreaming. I loved it. I think it's balanced well, but I've already said, I'm not a professional writer or a literature critic. Title is good enough as well.
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Nice story indeed! Kids like daydreaming. I loved it. I think it's balanced well, but I've already said, I'm not a professional writer or a literature critic. Title is good enough as well.
Thank you very much! Oh, feedback is always appreciated. Glad you liked it.