Hey there @adanesus, I love your writing and the story line.
I would suggest that you try your best with formatting next time, maybe do a bit of editing, add some photos...
I think that you would do so much better here with some small changes! Feel free to contact me on Discord (@tamacvet#5482) if you need some help!
I wish you all the best!
Thank you very much @tamacvet .I am glad that you gave me your feedback. I will definitely work on the things you mentioned. Thanks again! Keep giving me feedbacks like these. Have a great day!