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RE: Dawn of an Old New Love.Chapter Four

in #writing7 years ago

Hey there @adanesus, I love your writing and the story line.
I would suggest that you try your best with formatting next time, maybe do a bit of editing, add some photos...
I think that you would do so much better here with some small changes! Feel free to contact me on Discord (@tamacvet#5482) if you need some help!

I wish you all the best!

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Thank you very much @tamacvet .I am glad that you gave me your feedback. I will definitely work on the things you mentioned. Thanks again! Keep giving me feedbacks like these. Have a great day!